Friday, June 17, 2011

AW: June 2011 Blog Chain

(FYI, the NY state senate still have not come to an agreement on the proposed Marriage Equality bill. There's still time to make a difference. Read my last post to find out what you can do to help.)

Anyway! I've skipped out on these blog-chains for a few months, so I was having withdrawals! I joined AbsoluteWrite's June Blog Chain to assuage them.

This month, the prompt is Setting the Scene.
So here goes. This one's an excerpt from my current WIP, (less than three):

You do not need a time capsule to visit the 1300s. You just need to visit York.

We stand in the Shambles at dusk, listening to our tour guide spin his first tale. For the first time since we’ve been together, my eyes are not fixed on John. I stare at the buildings around us, the streets underfoot, every piece of this setting. The Shambles make up the oldest part of town. The tiny, close streets that have been the city center at least since 1086. Most of its current buildings are from the late 1300s and early 1400s. Ruts in the cobblestones show where horses dragged carts down this road for centuries. No cars could fit down the Shambles now, except maybe a Smart Car.

Overhead, two houses on opposite sides of the street lean so close together that they almost form a roof. You could stand in the upstairs window of one and shake hands with your neighbor.

The guide walks down the street and we follow, over the smooth-worn, mismatched stones, past the fourteenth-century church, with its melting glass windows, and into the city square. Toward a distant grass hill, atop which sits a huge white tower. The castle keep. A shiver runs down my spine before the guide even begins his next story.

I have an active imagination. I am good at picturing myself in other places, other worlds or time periods. It’s a requirement for a writer.

Here in York, I don’t even need to try. I am walking down medieval streets. Where I stand, Roman soldiers once built a capital city. Angles conquered that city. Vikings routed the town and created their own settlement. William the Conqueror quelled the northern rebellion here. Major battles in the English Civil War that John’s always talking about happened on these very streets.

“I see what you meant about this city,” I whisper to him.


Check out the other chain participants' blogs here!

orion_mk3
juniper
LadyMage
dolores haze
jkellerford
Ralph Pines
TheMindKiller
AuburnAssassin
pezie
WildScribe
Inkstrokes
Irissel
Guardian
Lyra Jean
egoodlett (ME!)
cwachob (the lovely crit-partner!)
xcomplex
Della Odell
Aheïla

12 comments:

  1. 'Melting glass windows' What a great visual! Our old family cottage had a big picture window and the bottom of the glass pane was thicker than the top and gave the outside the look of being underwwater.

    Old architecture gives me the shivers too.

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  2. Very evocative in conveying not only the feel of old York but also its history--a difficult balance to strike. Interesting that, despite the sense of past, the writing is in present tense.

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  3. There is a reason for the "melting glass windows", and the reason is that glass is not a solid but a liquid, a very thick liquid, but still a fluid, which means that with time it flows down.

    I love historical sights, and anything related to antiquity/middle ages. I have to visit the UK, I just have to.

    Thanks for the tour.

    I also liked the fact that she was so fascinated by what she saw that she tore her eyes away from her love. Nice detail.

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  4. That was a fun little excerpt to read!

    I look forward to seeing more from you!

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  5. Delightful! From the Vikings to a Smart car. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

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  6. thanks everyone! :) and @ralfast - yep, I know! glass is so cool like that.

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  7. You had me at York. I visited in 1982 and wish I had been a writer back then.

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  8. Very nicely done. I really loved the description of the neighbors shaking hands through the upstairs windows. You definitely get the visual span of distance there. I feel like I could hear the horses on the cobblestone streets.

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  9. Oh I love history and your description was fantastic. I've never been to England but your description makes me want to go and it wasn't even on my places to visit list.

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  10. Very nice. I've really enjoyed reading your teasers, can't wait to read more!

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  11. I've had this feeling before. The feeling of suddenly capturing a piece of history in your mind just from looking at old architecture or walking down a well-worn street. You suddenly start to wonder about who died on the spot you're standing on or what mother chased her children around that corner...

    It's a feeling I've always had a hard time describing because it almost seems to take me out of time... but you did it very nicely. Good read :)

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  12. Beautiful descriptions! I love the way the past meets the present. I love medieval architecture and castles, so it's no wonder this scene you have portrayed appeals to me. Very well executed and an enjoyable read.

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