So now, having read and enjoyed Pride and Prejudice and Northanger Abbey, I tried to give S&S another shot. And I loved it, as usual, right up until the cop-out ending.
Oh, Ms. Austen, why must you taunt us with your perfectly-woven web of storytelling, only to leave us hanging in said web at the last minute?
As I was reading this very abrupt, anti-climactic climax, I remembered the axiom imparted in us Bryn Mawr students by one of my professors: Show, don't tell. For the most part, I understood what this professor meant at the time. But nothing hammers a point home like frustration. So when I finally neared the end of the novel,
Marianne and Elinor head out on a walk, and just as Elinor is wondering if Marianne is recovered enough to hear this news, Marianne says, "At present, if I could be satisfied on one point, if I could be allowed to think that he was not always acting a part, not always deceiving me[...] If I could but know his heart, everything would become easy."
I think, now Elinor will reveal it all, now we will see how she takes it! For throughout the whole novel we've had pages-long descriptions of conversations, and the whole latter half of the book has been leading up to this one.
Instead, all we get is: "[Elinor] managed the recital, as she hoped, with address; prepared her anxious listener with caution; related simply and honestly the chief points on which Willoughby grounded his apology..." etc.
WHAT?!?!
To be fair, Sense and Sensibility had a good deal more closure than Pride and Prejudice ("then they were married and lived happily ever after the end"). But seeing as how I still had 5 and a half hours of my flight left by the time I set it down, I was rather put-out.
Show the reader what's happening at important intervals in the novel - especially the climax! - because telling it is not only boring, but even frustrating for the reader. Not that I don't love Ms. Austen. I just think we can safely agree that endings weren't her strongest point.
I must agree. Ms. Austen really never got the hang of creating a very satisfying ending to her stories. Still, a lot of love for Ms. Austen for regardless. Also for creating Mr. Darcy.
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